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A Matter of Trust

A Book by Yuri_B, Pixabay

I recently read a book by an author new to me—something I regularly do. About a third into the novel, I was struggling to invest in the hero. It wasn’t due to poor writing or a lack of interest in the storyline. The setting and description was adept and colourful, the struggles real and the villainous threat compelling. And yet, I felt next-to-nothing for the hero and was perplexed, instead of intrigued, by a parallel narrative that I wasn’t 100% certain the author could (or would) link back to the dominant plot.

As a persistent reader it takes a lot for me to hit a DNF (did not finish, for the uninitiated). I wasn’t at risk of that with this story, but found this disconnect unsettling. Fact was, it was making reading hard work—and it was not the first time I’d encountered this. Reflecting, there have been other new authors, highly decorated authors, whose heroes I’ve struggled to invest in. But then I had an “Aha” moment, as Lisa Cron would put it.

It’s a matter of trust.

As an emerging author there is much talk of building one’s platform and readership connection, but this moment was enlightening. I’ll explain why.

Trust by Lisa Caroselli, Pixabay

When a reader picks up one of my books for the first time, or a first time read of any other writer, they are engaging in an investment of time and emotions—and if they really like it, sleep debt! 😜😴 Like any “relationship”, we as readers take a risk. And with relationships, history is a significant factor. When there is no history [insert “never read this author before”], the level of trust is … well … non-existent.

I’ve seen this in reviews on my novels—readers saying they would have no patience for unrealistic “instant solutions”, and gratitude when they discover a hard-fought, satisfying resolution. But first-time readers don’t know if you can pull this off. There’s no history; no trust. Subconsciously they’re asking, “Is it worth investing time, energy and emotions into this story?” That’s why, on the rare occasions I have an opportunity to watch a movie, I’ll sometimes select a low-end romantic comedy—it’s minimal investment so I can pull out at any time, without any compulsion to return.

That’s what I was experiencing. Could the author really pull the story threads together? Were these increasingly insurmountable odds and, frankly, repeat dumb choices by the hero, able to be redeemed such that they could culminate into a heart-stopping, hero driven, but ultimately satisfying end?

I’m happy to report the author did pull this off, and next time I read one of their books I will be less wary, but it was a valuable learning experience for me as a writer. How about you? Have you ever found yourself doubting your first-time reading of an author, only to read to the end and discover a life-time favourite? Feel free to drop a comment below. I’d love to hear about your experiences. 😊

Cookie Cuts

Recently I had the privilege of participating in the “live and local” program in corroboration with the Sydney Writers Festival, The Lighthouse, and TRC. Joined by fellow authors, Nola Lorraine and Jessica Kate, we were invited to speak on the topic of “considering a faith-based life from an author’s perspective”. We also got to sit in on some great live-feed sessions, including with the renowned Trent Dalton.

As I sat listening to Trent’s extraordinary life story, he said something that set off a cracker in my brain. He shared about the moment he realised how incredible his family story was, and how this (very personal) story needed to be told.

In that moment it struck me how readily we take onboard and celebrate other people’s stories, yet seldom do we sit in the honesty and familiarity of our own journey to “here and now”, and allow ourselves to truly reflect on the key heroes and turning points in that world. None of us are made from a cookie cutter.

I have been, and continue to become, increasingly conscious of the individuality and uniqueness of each person’s journey and our swiftness to dismiss our own story as relevant and impactful. Yet, we are all positioned in this place-in-time for a purpose, making each of our stories extraordinary – whether we realise this, or not.

This raised for me two questions: Who am I? Who are you?

I ask these questions again, encouraging each of us to sit and reflect on the ordinary and familiar (to us), whilst celebrating the heroes that have paved the road to our now. What is our story?

The beautiful reality of humanity and our coexistence, is that each of us carry a voice that is our own, and no matter how loud or influential you (or I) feel our voice is, it is our mandate to not leave that voice unheard.

You and you alone possess your voice, in all its uniqueness, purpose, and power for this moment in time. For I quote: “Truth needs your voice” ~J. Enlow

Don’t let it go unheard.

Crazy Busy, or just Crazy?

It’s been a long time between blogs. Life rushes along at a pace that sees us blink, only to discover we’re over halfway through another year. (When did that happen?!)

Sometimes I wonder how we get ourselves into such a rush. One thing, then another, and suddenly we don’t seem to have time to meet up with friends, watch movies with family, or take those trips to visit out-of-the-way places. (Let’s face it, even cleaning the house and weeding the garden can be a challenge!)

Sometimes I wonder whether there’s a hidden gear stick somewhere that, if we could just find it, we could bring the pace down a little.

And yet, in the busy many great things can happen. And have been happening. For me, there’s just not been as much writing as I’d like …

A question I’ve been asked more than once is how to maintain a consistent writing habit with everything else that draws on our time. Usually my response runs along the lines of there being different seasons in life, with a different focus. Sometimes writing must take a back seat.

Sounds philosophical, right? I even tried giving up writing six or so months ago. Unfortunately I didn’t factor on the characters in my head not getting the memo! (Hey, that’s not as bad as it sounds.)

The fact is we’re wired for story. Lisa Cron reiterates this over and again in her writing resources. (And if you don’t know who Lisa Cron is and you’re a writer, seriously, you MUST google her.) Even in the busy, even in the I-can’t-write-now seasons, we can’t (and shouldn’t) stop the stories. But the stories I’m talking about aren’t necessarily the next brilliant novel on our writing lists.

By stories, I mean those everyday narratives of life: the who-we-are and how-we-are-doing stories. The stories that empower us to connect, if we allow them time to be shared and received. And the more we learn about ourselves as humans, the more we understand the critical importance of meaningful connection. This takes time, of which we seem to have so little.

It doesn’t matter whether you’re a writer or reader or neither, find someone. Find several someones. Somehow we need to find a way to pause the crazy-busy for a while and share our stories with each other.

Even if we have to find that magical gear shift and drop it down one for a while, I know it’ll be worth it.

Twice Stolen – Susanne Timpani Blog Hop

SusanneTToday I have the pleasure of introducing debut author, Susanne Timpani. Susanne is married, has four beautiful children and works as a community nurse with families. (So, she’s a busy lady!) Themes of her work and her faith appear in her writing. She’s also the author of the blog, 10 Minute Daily Retreat, twice weekly reflections on scripture. And she’s kindly agreed to chat about her new novel, Twice Stolen:

‘After the death of his grandmother, Dimitri finds he’s been lied to most of his life. His journey into the Outback to unravel the mystery of his identity leads to an encounter with Leah, a nurse with a tragic secret.’

Twice Stolen broaches issues of identity, loss, love and betrayal, and is woven around the theme of Australia’s Indigenous Stolen Generation. You can find out more on this aspect of the novel in Susanne’s interview yesterday on the CWD blog.Twice Stolen cover high resolution

Whilst prompting deeper reflection on the generational impact of the policy effecting widespread removal of Indigenous children from their families, this novel also emulates the traditional storytelling of Indigenous Australians, entwining the Biblical Song of Songs (Song of Solomon) through this element. In Q&A format, Susanne’s going to tell us a little more about this aspect of her story.

Q. What sparked the idea of incorporating the Biblical Song of Songs as a framework for your novel?
A. The Song is considered by some as one of the greatest love songs in history. Its fame in the ancient world parallels our Romeo and Juliet or Pride and Prejudice. Given that Twice stolen is written in the genre of Inspirational Fiction, I decided its themes provided a strong foundation on which to build the plot.

Q. Twice Stolen draws on the emotional awakenings depicted in Song of Songs. How is this significant in the novel?
A. The Song of Songs is like any love story. The characters experience an ebb and flow of emotion in their relationship. They face obstacles and resolutions appear almost impossible. The reader wonders if the characters’ love is strong enough to endure.

Q. The young adult protagonists both carry vulnerabilities because of their situations. Do you feel there are similarities between your characters and the lovers in Song of Songs?
A. My characters, Dimitri and Leah, like to think so.

Q. Okay, I think Dimitri and Leah might be a little biased. 🙂 What do you think?
A. Absolutely. The Song of Songs describes the love between King Solomon, named the ‘Lover’, and a local girl, the ‘Beloved’. The Beloved finds it difficult to comprehend how a king could possibly love her, a mere keeper of a vineyard. Despite returning his feelings, she spends a great proportion of the Song denying them and rejecting his love. The Lover never wavers in his feelings, believing that in the end she’ll come around.

Q. This makes it sound like Dimitri’s love is not reciprocated as ardently by Leah. Is it really so one sided?
A. Not at all. The Song of Songs is thought to appear in the Bible because it reflects the relationship of love which exists between God and ourselves. God is our steadfast Lover, and we, His recalcitrant Beloved. It doesn’t take Leah and Dimitri too long to realize that they are both similar to the Beloved, and in the end, God alone is the true Lover.

Q. Lastly, is there a verse from Song of Songs you feel best captures the heart of this story?
A. Definitely.

for love is as strong as death,
its jealousy[a] unyielding as the grave.
It burns like blazing fire,
like a mighty flame.[b]
7 Many waters cannot quench love;
rivers cannot sweep it away. Song of Songs 8:6-7

Throughout the hurdles Dimitri and Leah must face in Twice Stolen, they constantly question the strength of their love. They each face a major life challenge and something innate must change within or their romance doesn’t stand a chance. They question whether it is even possible to have love as strong as this verse describes.

Thanks so much for sharing with us today, Susanne. I enjoyed reading Twice Stolen and found myself drawn by Dimitri’s and Leah’s stories – as I’m sure your future readers will, too. Twice Stolen won the 2012 CALEB prize for an unpublished manuscript and is due for release on Valentine’s Day weekend (Feb 12-14) in South Australia, and will be launched in the company of Susanne’s publisher, Anne Hamilton, founder and director of Armour Books. For more about Susanne visit her website and 10 Minute Daily Retreat. To connect you can also find her on Facebook and Goodreads.